Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour

This deviation was deleted


:icondoctormo:
This piece is very interesting. Firstly with the technique I see all parts of the work are a good relative quality and are in focus well enough. I felt the red and white ribbon could have been sharper using a vector source.

The combination of the spiro-graph lines and drawn images make parts look like a British bank note. I wouldn't be surprised to see this as a special 5 pound note. The colours of the lines are striking, clear and don't clash much with the many colours behind them.

The background is nicely colour co-ordinated, we get a shift between blue, red and white as the focus drifts from the background to the foreground.

Emotively this piece makes me feel like all of this noise and bountiful commotion is coming from our main figure. We are seeing her artistic expressions and learning how busy a dialectic artists have going on in their heads.

I love the quote, it's a great quote and goes well with the image depiction. It's colour could be made to stand out more by using bold and either stroked lines or a box.

Overall, I love this piece; it's a great combination of elements and a good composition.
The Artist thought this was FAIR
2 out of 2 deviants thought this was fair.

Comments


:iconinoki-sakaeru:
Inoki-Sakaeru Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you for your kind words! They're much appreciated and really helpful on improving! Merry Christmas and the best start into 2013! :)
Reply
:icondoctormo:
doctormo Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Merry Yule to you too! Don't forget to eat too much, drink quite a lot and get very merry indeed! :-D
Reply
Add a Comment: